Custom jutsu

Name: Dim Mak/Kyusho Jitsu
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Chakra Usage: 0
Description: This jutsu is based off of the infamous ‘Ninja Death Touch,’ or the famous ‘Vulcan Nerve Pinch'. The user attacks the Reticular Activating System (RAS), a cluster of cells located at the base of the brain that is responsible for keeping us conscious. Disruption of the RAS by either direct trauma, or the application of force on specific pressure-points, can cause temporary unconsciousness.

Name: Baiseido
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu/Clan jutsu
Chakra Usage: 1
Description: This jutsu uses specially made senbon, which are thrown with great accuracy at various pressure-points in a persons body. Depending on the pressure-point being targeted various effects can be acheived.

These sound kinda strong for a Genin, but for you.... I'll approve. These jutsu's aren't overpowered completely, so ya.

One wouldn't be a Genin jutsu.

I can up the other to B rank too if you'd prefer.

Ya. No offense, but I'd prefer if they were both B's. I just feel uncomfortable with the top as a C.

It's totally fine. ^__^ I wasn't sure when I was making them. I appreciate your input.

And I thank your kind words. Most people would complain. I appreciate your kindess over everything. ^_^

Unless someone tells me that my kitteh is evil, I don't get mad. I really want to keep everything I do with my character balanced and not in any way over powered so I in fact like it when people tell me if I need to change things. It helps because sometimes you're not all that sure if something is overpowered or too weak.

If this is accepted, I'll move it to the second acception forum.

Yup. Go ahead and do that. I'm about to make a few techniques, So hope they get approved.

Explain the effects more in the second one

I didn't? Waa! I didn't!

Sorry. I meant to.

Okay:

1. The user could put the victim into a slight coma like state.
2. The user could hit a specific nerve cluster that causes pain.
3. The user could knock the victim unconscious.
4. The user could paralyze the victim.

All of these states can be reversed by someone with the right knowledge hitting the same pressure-points. Or, they wear off after a spell.

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